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Those Bums[Level 1][SOLO] Dec 16, 2012 13:18:14 GMT -5

Post by Yuki-chan on Dec 16, 2012 13:18:14 GMT -5

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Location.
TORUBANA ROAD: Wild Hollow

Objective.
Yuki found managed to fall asleep from lack of sleep fearing that he would get jumped in the middle of the night by monsters. Where he happened to fall asleep was in some Npc's front yard. He awoke by a rough kick to the ribs by the NPC who was looking down at him and glaring at him. "Miss you happen to be sleeping in my flower garden.." the old lady looked down at him with peering eyes that showed nothing more than hate. " you have ruined my whole flower garden so you must help me with a quest to repay for what you have done." Feeling groggy from just waking up Yuki had close to no idea what she was talking about. " You must get rid of the other creatures.. that are ruining my garden that I worked so hard on making. Find them and kill them for me; you should know which monsters for they will have part of MY flowers stuck on them. Kill them and bring the flowers back to me."

+[C Level-1]Kill two Spiders
+[C Level-2] Kill one large bee
+Bring her back the flowers for proof.

Participants.
Solo

Requested Rewards.
Rawhide Leather Squares, Silk Thread

Notes.
This is my first solo quest. Bear with me. Ahahah bear joke.-shot-.

Last Edit: Dec 16, 2012 14:44:57 GMT -5 by Yuki-chan

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ARCELIA DATA HEAD ADMINISTRATOR Posts: 32	Those Bums[Level 1][SOLO] Dec 16, 2012 14:39:47 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ARCELIA on Dec 16, 2012 14:39:47 GMT -5 PENDING Please include the c-level of the beasts you are fighting and then I'll be able to accept.

Yuki-chan MISSING IN ACTION 1 (4)[M:1050] Posts: 20	Those Bums[Level 1][SOLO] Dec 16, 2012 14:45:44 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Yuki-chan on Dec 16, 2012 14:45:44 GMT -5 Fixed. I knew I was forgetting something.
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ARCELIA DATA HEAD ADMINISTRATOR Posts: 32	Those Bums[Level 1][SOLO] Dec 16, 2012 14:49:24 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ARCELIA on Dec 16, 2012 14:49:24 GMT -5 ACCEPTED Thank you! Reply here with a link to the IC thread and you'll be in progress!

Yuki-chan MISSING IN ACTION 1 (4)[M:1050] Posts: 20	Those Bums[Level 1][SOLO] Dec 16, 2012 16:14:08 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Yuki-chan on Dec 16, 2012 16:14:08 GMT -5 IC Thread
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Yuki-chan MISSING IN ACTION 1 (4)[M:1050] Posts: 20	Those Bums[Level 1][SOLO] Dec 18, 2012 20:09:25 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Yuki-chan on Dec 18, 2012 20:09:25 GMT -5 Done~
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Those Bums[Level 1][SOLO] Dec 20, 2012 2:18:41 GMT -5

Post by DUSTY on Dec 20, 2012 2:18:41 GMT -5

COMPLETED

Yuki-chan

SKILLUPS:
ONE HANDED AXES. +3
LIGHT METAL EQUIPMENT. +3
HARVESTING. +0
TAILORING. +0

EXPERIENCE:
300 EXP

MONEY:
300 COL

MISC:
SILK SCRAPS x2
SILK CLOTH x2
SILK THREAD x2
RAWHIDE LEATHER SCRAPS x2
VIAL OF WEAK BLOOD x1
THYME x1

NOTES: First off, neither of the critters your character faced dropped rawhide leather squares - do check the in-game manual when aiming for specific stuff!

Second, you're a little repetitive. I'm not docking points, but I have the creeping suspicion that not all mods would have been quite so generous. Try to vary your prose a bit, trim out the excess fluff; if a sentence doesn't feel necessary, be merciless with it!

Other than that, I think it was a fine effort! I'm glad you've explored his moral dilemma without dipping too far into melodrama, and remained realistic throughout the battles.