Wolf Hunt! [Lv2][Solo]

COMPLETED

Yumi

EXPERIENCE:
0 EXP

MONEY:
150 COL

MISC:
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NOTES:
Although this is a minor thing, I've noticed that you've used the word 'did' a lot in your sentences [again].
Using Ctrl+F on your posts, you've used the word: did 45 times. Did isn't really needed in more than half the times you've used them. They seem unnecessary to me and clutter your sentences.

Along with that, there were occasional mistakes in spelling, though it's nothing that can't be remedied with rereading [ex: fairy tail] as well as the occasional run-ons: [ex: Not killing the wolf but damaging it quite heavily if it could bleed it would have been dead by now but there is no blood in this world so it did get to survive a little more it did jump to try bite her in the head but cause of her small size the wolf did simply jump to high, She did then lift up her dagger cutting the wolf all the way down its belly making it explode over her head.]

I like the fact that you've split up your post to make it easier to read so quest mods don't get overwhelmed by giant paragraphs [as I know from being graded myself that it's a pet peeve of some], but when you divide them, be sure to divide them in a way that makes sense. Some of your new paragraphs seem to begin abruptly.

The dream concept too was interesting, though I would've docked a smidgen exp if we still gave that out since dreams really shouldn't be giving out exp XD.
You were given some time by Savvy to re-read your quests before you submit them for mistakes you might otherwise not catch. However, because this quest came earlier, I won't be so strict. vuv Next time though, I will unfortunately have to dock more col and exp if needed.

Know that you should read up on these notes that are left for you! <3 They're only here to help you develop your writing. C: