A WALK IN THE PARK [SOLO]

PHANTOM
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A WALK IN THE PARK [SOLO] Dec 11, 2012 18:44:12 GMT -5

Post by PHANTOM on Dec 11, 2012 18:44:12 GMT -5

Name.
A Walk In The Park[Level 1][Solo]

Location.
Torubana Road.

Objective.

Ah! You there, [ insert name here]. Yes, you! I am in dire need of assistance! The winter is coming and my family is without any means to buy clothing or food. Would it be possible if someone of your valor can head to Torubana Road and bring back the loot from some of the beasts there so we can sell it? Thank-you so much!

Monsters Being Battled

Swine
Wild Boar - C LEVEL: 1

A boar whose movements are linear but quite unexpected. Easily aggroed in groups. Primary colors are dark violet fur that is tousled and glowing yellow eyes. Usually has a battle cry. Is frequently sought out in Torubana Road.

Participants.
Solo.

Requested Rewards.
Equipment, Slab of Meat, Garlic, Carrot, Lettuce

Notes.
n/a

INVENTORY TRACKER

ARCELIA DATA HEAD ADMINISTRATOR Posts: 32	A WALK IN THE PARK [SOLO] Dec 11, 2012 18:58:03 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ARCELIA on Dec 11, 2012 18:58:03 GMT -5 ACCEPTED Reply here with a link to the IC thread and you'll be in progress!

PHANTOM MISSING IN ACTION 1 (5)[M:500] [ smile like its your last ] Posts: 50	A WALK IN THE PARK [SOLO] Dec 14, 2012 16:57:25 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by PHANTOM on Dec 14, 2012 16:57:25 GMT -5 Its here. Will post back when it is finished.
	INVENTORY TRACKER

Pascaline
DATA
[M:0]

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A WALK IN THE PARK [SOLO] Dec 15, 2012 22:41:51 GMT -5

Post by Pascaline on Dec 15, 2012 22:41:51 GMT -5

COMPLETED

SKILLUPS:
ONE-HANDED STRAIGHT SWORDS. +4
SHIELD EQUIPMENT. +2
LIGHT METAL EQUIPMENT. +1
MARTIAL ARTS. +0

EXPERIENCE:
300 EXP

MONEY:
300 COL

MISC:
SLAB OF PORK x3
CARROT x1
GARLIC x3
RAWHIDE LEATHER SCRAPS x1

NOTES: All right, so I generally liked that your quest was story-oriented and had a clear sequence of events, including an interesting altercation between your character and others to fully initiate the quest. However, there were some things that led me to dock two items from your overall rewards. You have a lot of repetitive scenes and sentences, as well as action sequences that made me believe a boar had been slain but it was still running around come the next post. As a suggestion, it's always good to read everything before posting. I always do that as well and have made the same mistakes.