What Could Go Wrong? [level 1][GP]

CHIASA
MISSING IN ACTION

Aspire to Inspire

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What Could Go Wrong? [level 1][GP] Dec 16, 2012 14:35:43 GMT -5

Post by CHIASA on Dec 16, 2012 14:35:43 GMT -5

Name.
What Could Go Wrong? [Level 1][GP]

Location.
Isle of Mystery

Objective.
An NPC recently inherited a house from one of her relatives that has passed away. The house is located on the Isle of Mystery and has long since been abandoned. She has hired a few players to go out and explore the deserted house. The last person she hired came back saying they never went in as they had seen dark shadows and heard strange noises. Investigate the house and see what lurks inside and bring back a memento for the NPC. If there are any monsters, eliminate them and determine if the house if safe for her to return or not. What mysteries lurk within?~

x 2 Kobold Thieves [c-level 2]
x 3 Goblin Spiders [c-level 1]
x 1 Spider King [c-level 4]

Participants.
-Chiasa
-Isolde
-Shi

Requested Rewards.
Tailoring/leather materials and ingots.

Notes.
n/a

Last Edit: Dec 16, 2012 18:58:52 GMT -5 by CHIASA

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SHI PLAYER Nothing is true; everything is permitted. Posts: 195 C-LEVEL: 6 (51)	What Could Go Wrong? [level 1][GP] Dec 16, 2012 16:23:05 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SHI on Dec 16, 2012 16:23:05 GMT -5 If you have room for one more, Shi would like to join.
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CHIASA MISSING IN ACTION Aspire to Inspire Posts: 111 C-LEVEL: 4 (17)	What Could Go Wrong? [level 1][GP] Dec 16, 2012 18:58:41 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by CHIASA on Dec 16, 2012 18:58:41 GMT -5 No problem! Adding you in. We're ready for acceptance~
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Isolde MISSING IN ACTION 3 (27)[M:2440] I'm not going to take 'no' for an answer. Posts: 63	What Could Go Wrong? [level 1][GP] Dec 16, 2012 19:01:00 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Isolde on Dec 16, 2012 19:01:00 GMT -5 Registering for this quest!
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DJ DATA [M:0] The Romantic Detective! Posts: 1	What Could Go Wrong? [level 1][GP] Dec 16, 2012 20:23:22 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by DJ on Dec 16, 2012 20:23:22 GMT -5 ACCEPTED Reply here with a link to the IC thread and you'll be in progress!

CHIASA MISSING IN ACTION Aspire to Inspire Posts: 111 C-LEVEL: 4 (17)	What Could Go Wrong? [level 1][GP] Dec 16, 2012 21:00:28 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by CHIASA on Dec 16, 2012 21:00:28 GMT -5 Quest start!
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CHIASA MISSING IN ACTION Aspire to Inspire Posts: 111 C-LEVEL: 4 (17)	What Could Go Wrong? [level 1][GP] Dec 24, 2012 10:57:54 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by CHIASA on Dec 24, 2012 10:57:54 GMT -5 Quest Complete!
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QUILL DATA [M:0] Posts: 3	What Could Go Wrong? [level 1][GP] Dec 27, 2012 14:21:33 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by QUILL on Dec 27, 2012 14:21:33 GMT -5 IN REVIEW [/center][/blockquote][/blockquote][/blockquote]

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What Could Go Wrong? [level 1][GP] Dec 27, 2012 16:08:07 GMT -5

Post by QUILL on Dec 27, 2012 16:08:07 GMT -5

COMPLETED

Chiasa

SKILLUPS:
POLEARMS. +3
LEATHER EQUIPMENT. +2
WEAPONSMITHING. +0
PARRYING. +1
SPRINTING. +3

EXPERIENCE:
500 EXP

MONEY:
500 COL

MISC:
COPPER INGOT x3
SILK CLOTH x3
TINY VENOM SACK x1
RAWHIDE LEATHER SCRAPS x2

NOTES: Good overall. I think there were a couple of sentences in there maybe that could have done with a reread aloud to make sure they sounded alright, but otherwise good.

Isolde

SKILLUPS:
TWO-HANDED SWORDS. +3
LIGHT METAL EQUIPMENT. +3
PARRYING. +2
COOKING. +0
SPRINTING. +1
PERFORM +0

EXPERIENCE:
500 EXP

MONEY:
500 COL

MISC:
SILK SCRAPS x2
BRONZE INGOT x2
VIAL OF WEAK BLOOD x2
VANILLA BEAN x2
THYME x1

NOTES: Good jorb dere homsar. You are leveling like crazy, lady. *is jealous*

Shi

SKILLUPS:
ONE-HANDED SWORDS. +3
MARTIAL ARTS. +2
LEATHER EQUIPMENT. +1
PARRYING. +0
HIDING. +2
SNEAKING +3
ACROBATICS +1

EXPERIENCE:
450 EXP

MONEY:
500 COL

MISC:
SILK SCRAPS x2
SILK THREAD x2
TIN INGOT x2
VIAL OF WEAK BLOOD x1
ONION x2
BLACK SPIDERWEAVE GLOVES x1 (Q)

NOTES: The biggest problem I had was with your use of Hiding and Sneaking. Your character only has a few levels into these skills, he shouldn't be able to disappear. Keep in mind that you have 1000 possible skill levels to go into this. You're not going to be that amazing at level 4 or 5 in Sneak. At later levels? Sure. Now? Eh...
Well written, but I did have a problem with the above and with the fact that, until the last minute you didn't get hit at all. It was a little unrealistic to me, but you did get hit, so I only docked some EXP for the above.