So You Think You're Fancy [SOLO][LEVEL 1]

PHANTOM
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So You Think You're Fancy [SOLO][LEVEL 1] Dec 16, 2012 7:44:47 GMT -5

Post by PHANTOM on Dec 16, 2012 7:44:47 GMT -5

Name.
So You Think You're Fancy [SOLO][LEVEL 1]

Location.
Torubana Road: Wild Hollow

Objective.

Hey there! You look pretty new here, how about I tell you a little secret? Everything you know ain't gonna help you survive here son! You gotta train, get stronger! Bigger! And I know just the way to help you do that! Don't think of inviting any of your little buddies, you're going solo on this one! Now! I want you to hunt a herd of Kobolds, trust me it isn't as easy that. You have to venture all the way to the Wild Hollow by Torubana Road! Not scared yet, well I want you to defeat each of these hordes as many times as they list says. And don't think I won't count! Now get to it, pansy!

[x4]Halbred - C LEVEL: 1 - KOBOLD

The Halbred Kobolds aren't as dangerous as its counterparts. They often hobble about mumbling to themselves about humans. But once a human in spotted, they are relentless with their attacks. Never one to aggro; always to fight head on with their opponent. The Halbred's one downfall is that they always keep their face open being easy to blind them and escape.

Participants.
Solo.

Requested Rewards.
Copper Ingot, Bronze Ingot, Tin Ingot, Black Peppercorn and a Weapon

Notes.
This quest is apart of his story-line and is meant to train his core skills.

Last Edit: Dec 16, 2012 18:24:34 GMT -5 by PHANTOM

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glu DATA [M:0] THE SWAG MONSTER Posts: 4	So You Think You're Fancy [SOLO][LEVEL 1] Dec 16, 2012 10:26:03 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by glu on Dec 16, 2012 10:26:03 GMT -5 PENDING There are too many monsters for a solo based on your level. Please lessen the amount.

PHANTOM MISSING IN ACTION 1 (5)[M:500] [ smile like its your last ] Posts: 50	So You Think You're Fancy [SOLO][LEVEL 1] Dec 16, 2012 18:24:52 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by PHANTOM on Dec 16, 2012 18:24:52 GMT -5 Fixed.
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ARCELIA DATA HEAD ADMINISTRATOR Posts: 32	So You Think You're Fancy [SOLO][LEVEL 1] Dec 16, 2012 23:26:33 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ARCELIA on Dec 16, 2012 23:26:33 GMT -5 ACCEPTED Reply here with a link to the IC thread and you'll be in progress!

PHANTOM MISSING IN ACTION 1 (5)[M:500] [ smile like its your last ] Posts: 50	So You Think You're Fancy [SOLO][LEVEL 1] Dec 21, 2012 15:01:50 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by PHANTOM on Dec 21, 2012 15:01:50 GMT -5 Its being started, here.
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Pascaline
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So You Think You're Fancy [SOLO][LEVEL 1] Dec 23, 2012 6:26:57 GMT -5

Post by Pascaline on Dec 23, 2012 6:26:57 GMT -5

COMPLETED

SKILLUPS:
ONE-HANDED STRAIGHT SWORDS. +2
MARTIAL ARTS. +2
LIGHT METAL ARMOR. +2
SHIELD EQUIPMENT. +1

EXPERIENCE:
300 EXP

MONEY:
300 COL

MISC:
COPPER INGOT x 2
TIN INGOT x 2
GREEN WOOD PLANKS x 1
BLACK PEPPERCORN x 2
RAWHIDE LEATHER SQUARES x 1
VIAL OF WEAK BLOOD x 1

NOTES: All right, so first I want to say that I did notice an immense improvement in your writing since the last quest I graded for you. I can tell you checked back for spelling and grammar mistakes, as I found little to none. ~~Not to say that you specifically make a lot of mistakes, but in general most people do while writing a large piece like this.~~ However, I did feel that you skimped on the description of your attacks, especially regarding the first and third kobolds. The description of physical attacks were very good, but the sword attacks seemed more implied. For that, I had to dock two points from your sword skill up grade.

I did really like the story you made with the girl, and I have a hunch I'll be seeing her again. I look forward to reading your next quest!