THE QUEST FOR METAL[Level 1][GP]

COMPLETED

Wall III

SKILLUPS:
TWO-HANDED MACES. + 3
ARMORSMITHING. +0
PARRYING. +0
HEAVY METAL EQUIPMENT. +2

BEAST TAMER. +0

EXPERIENCE:
500 EXP

MONEY:
500 COL

MISC:
BRONZE INGOTS x 2
COPPER INGOTS x 2
TIN INGOTS x 3
RAWHIDE LEATHER SQAURES x 2
SILK CLOTH x 1

NOTES: I'd be careful with the crowd cleaners, they obviously make sense from a physical reality standpoint, but in hitting multiple targets at once you've basically given yourself an E-ranked sword art without actually using or purchasing a sword art.

I think someone has already mentioned to you that getting hit more often will raise the level of your armor faster, even the +2 was a bit of a stretch.

Other than that, it was solidly written and I look forward to more from Wall III!

Grackis

SKILLUPS:
TWO-HANDED SWORDS + 3
HEAVY METAL ARMOR. + 2
PARRYING. + 2
WEAPON SMITHING + 0

EXPERIENCE:
500 EXP

MONEY:
500 COL

MISC:
BRONZE INGOTS x 2
COPPER INGOTS x 3
SILK CLOTH x 2

NOTES: You've received a few fewer items due to your short posts! Other than that, your writing is solid and effective in conveying the action.

As a note: you do switch to the present tense for no apparent reason, and some of your sentences could benefit from a bit more breathing room. Don't be afraid to add a comma or two where necessary!